O slumber!
Come to me…
Cushion me in your lap,
Let me lunge in you,
Into the darkness that you offer.
I see darkness all around….
More gloomy than your shade,
Brutal acts and broken hearts…
Here smiles too seem to fade.
I prefer you to the mirage of world,
That invites me,
But, to face it... I shirk,
Come! O come! Let me escape!
Into my own illusionary world,
Where joy tugs me ,
Where my love hugs me!
Bountiful is my little world!
only I miss the tears there..
you see, I am so accustomed to the factual world!!
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Am I going into some depth? Into which core am I going? Do I have any depth ? Am I deep within?
9 comments:
Wow drishti!!!!
amazin poem!
keep it up girl!
oooops!
sry abt d user name...
dis is diya!
hey thanx!
Ya this is really nice, much better than before..keep up the work..
Hello. This post is likeable, and your blog is very interesting, congratulations :-). I will add in my blogroll =). If possible gives a last there on my blog, it is about the MP3 e MP4, I hope you enjoy. The address is http://mp3-mp4-brasil.blogspot.com. A hug.
Well I went thoughtless for a moment... and I think I still am...
i will just leave two lines...
Slumber,O' Slumber
Carry me in you
In darkness, you offer
For which she calls to you
I too want to be her partner
In exploration of you
Want to know, want to feel
What she saw in you
But I won't be there forever
I would ask her to be dere with you
Until I drink her part of the tears
Unless the world is fit for her to
And then I would sure come
To fall deep within you
Coz I know that deep down there
I have my world in you...
[Copyrights: Subhankar De]
Hope you liked it... Ur poem was d inspiration...beautiful u shud write more or atleast share wid me absolutely anything u write... as for me if possible i would chose never 2 sleep... till d time for my never-ending sleep. And if possible (though impossible I know) I wish I just could take all the pain in this world and never return...well it's been more of me and less of you in your blog comment... How completely narcissist of me... here I go again... anyways Gud Luck and please keep on writing... Its something which you will have for yourself for ever...
This is me signing off
Adios
Subhankar De
aka
Dark - Knight
i seriously don't have any words to reply...wat all i can remark is... don't knw abt the original post but u have definitly beautified my blog with yet more deeper comments... its my honour to have received such thoughtful comments.
thanx:)
"only I miss the tears there..
you see, I am so accustomed to the factual world!! "
simply sweet.
i have read ur poems posted in poemhunter. nice work.
cheers!
Hey I saw your comment on my blog, very late... I have not been using my old id frequently neither orkut, nor blog. Please do catch up @ Subhankarde1@gmail.com
I am on facebook as well...
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